so, heres a poem i wrote recently, let me know if it's good or not, thanks.
Memories
Tasting the sweetly sour tang
Lets the pungent aroma swirl
Twisting through the air,
Wrapping all it touches in curls
Soft as a summer's day,
Deep as the winter sea,
Dry as the toasted desert,
And cool as sweet mint tea.
As old pictures flash before my eyes
I sink into memories
And as I'm soaring through the clouds
I'm hoping you never see
What I used to be
But I guess you'll never know
When it's all about to blow
All around in the air
You can feel that glistening glare
The shove rocks your world
And your life begins to unfurl
That's whe